In this competitive world university degrees are major reasons to settle in life, In the other hand some people think that,University degrees will not help people in leading successful life. University degrees are more important to lead successful life in competitive era. This essay describes various importance of having degree and how it helps people.
First and foremost, University degree help people to secure good knowledge on various subjects. That means, They get more knowledge on the various options available to choose and work for the better results. In addition to this, People who completed degrees will have extra scope of knowledge and they can easily absorb content from various sources when they required, They also have plethora of opportunity's to succeed. However, People who did not have degrees are
permitted to work in industry's as common labour which required more physical work and wages also less.
Secondly, Even non degree holders are also in better position in their life but they are dependent on certified people. In addition to it, they just run the plan based on their employees for success. Furthermore, They can't take decisions independently where more logic and computers work involved. It is unavoidable situation for them. Though, Degree holders are earning more when compared to non degree holders, this difference will continue to grow as they university degrees are most valued by oraganizations.
To recapitulate, People from both sides who has university degrees and not having degrees are succeeding in their life. In my opinion, people who hold degree has better opportunity's to work and their living style also significantly changed. thus, University degrees are more important to be on top of competition these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , University
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...ver, People who did not have degrees are permitted to work in industrys as common...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mployees for success. Furthermore, They cant take decisions independently where more...
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...iving style also significantly changed. thus, University degrees are more important ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76068425413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7424675038 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242021492626 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963333205895 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968748354583 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143081494315 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115123870075 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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