Nowaday's, company has need a manager to get success because organiser can make rule for firms. The question is believed by individuals the managers should make rules alone in the company. By contrast, others claim that employees should be involved when any company controller make decision for company. Here, i would discuss both views in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, why some masses think that superviser alone should make decision for comapny the first and foremost reason is managers hire by company owners for firms safety and development. To make it more clear, if a person have enough knowledge to build network of their companies and they have ability to run a bussiness better than others because they are proficent in their education. A survey was conducted in USA and their government obtained 90% supervisor make decision for company because they complete education to related about firms. Hence, it is better for managers to make decision alone.
On the other hand, there are several reason why others masses think that workers should be involved in decision making process the major one is they familiar with the company work. In other words, employees are very crucial for organization because craftsman work all day at the work place and they know all better things that can help to develop bussiness. For instance, a study reveled by mexico times of newspaper senior leadership allow their emplyoees to give feedback on particular issues. As a result, they can make better decision for organization.
In conclusion, although some company managers make decision alone but according to me it is very essential to take advice from employees because workers are familiar with the work place area and they konw what is good and bad decision for firms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...roller make decision for company. Here, i would discuss both views in subsequent ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12714776632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53284420604 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.99694105 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388881284049 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161718031784 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980967658195 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259536373982 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613681916086 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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