The social pattern has been changing during the last decades, and the way people interact with each other have both become more dependent and independent. This essay will explain my opinion in detail.
To begin with, due to development of infrastructures and the progress of technology, people are allowed to find a position far from their family. Through the internet and social media provided, communication from different sides of the world becomes feasible. Compared to the past, it usually took a day between cities; therefore people tended to find jobs in their hometown which largely shrinks their possibilities on career. As a result, more and more people rent an apartment alone in a different where they work, so they have to learn to buy groceries and pay the bills themselves. This certainly makes them become more independent.
On the other hand, for a society where living cost has been growing gradually within years, it is necessary for parents to be breadwinners. In this situation, they have to turn to babysitters and the child’s grandparents for help. Furthermore, apart from working, they do not have spare time to do the housekeeping, cooking and so on. The only solution is to find a housekeeper or dine out every night. This indicates that people in the modern world need others’ help more than usual.
By way of conclusion, although there are differing views about whether people become more independent or not, I would argue that the opinions of both sides are correct and this topic can be analyzed from different perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, apart from, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10465116279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85864997765 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9791672576 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300117238748 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100234455988 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962239470351 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190500837821 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617013887906 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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