Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Music is also an art form which people listen to for pleasure, however, some believe that it is imperative to our culture. It is debatable, if it should be valued as part of the community.
The songs bring people of all ages together. Needless to say, during family functions the irresistible beats of any instrument adds life in the party, and provokes everyone to dance together via which a friendly bond is forged between young and elderly. I strongly feel that it is a source of livelihood as well as fame for myriad of human beings. For example, plethora of eminent celebrities has earned name and popularity just by being able to sing and play any instrumental device with the best of their ability. Therefore, the significance of musicians and their work shouldn’t go unrecognised.
Undoubtedly, any musical instrument like drum, violin, piano or guitar, each one of the devices carry their own unique value which most of the listeners find rejuvenating. Nonetheless, it is seen merely as the combination of lyrics emanating
Melody because they are of the opinion that their sole purpose is to amuse everyone with their rhyming tones. In my viewpoint, each kind of music has great influence not only on mankind, but also on the whole society, be it pop, classical or traditional music. An array of musical schools and institutions witness the inclination of the youngsters and in future the scope of this field will be brighter than ever.
To sum up, the growing demand for the music is inevitable. The impact of the melodious tracks is powerful and influential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, kind of, as well as, in my view, on the whole, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96616541353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82327823538 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5942377657 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101046487931 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032730350594 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410490748182 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571824156134 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415236855181 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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