Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some that to become a responsible citizen of society, parents are relating with children inextricably, while other prefer that educational institutions are predominate factor to burgeon any child properly. In my opinion, having characteristics like, obedience, self-negation and co-operation school as well as guardian ply indispensable role in juveniles life.
To start with, children spend hefty amount of their life with parents, since from coming in the earth. So it is assumable that they learn values, respect others, show perseverance about social matter, therefore, rudimentary rules and regulations which is mandatory to viable in the society. Take it for example, as a human being every man should respect women not dominate them, think that they has also equal rights in every sector of life, however this is not present in some man's character. This is because of family, beginning of their adolescence they keep some prejudice about women which turns their sophisticate mentality to a jeopardize situation. Needless to say, for proper bringing-up children parents are inevitable part, therefore, others members and school.
On the other hand, despite parents taught teach fundamental aspects in order to get practical experience school is also necessary. In other words, when they come their they bound to maintain rules, lead their life in a disciplinary way and involve in some social co-operative activities. By this way, children become paragon personality and know what is accurate perspective or not, whether transform them to a stagnate and endure person.
To my mind, I strongly believe that both parents and institution is crucial for a child to deal with their life. Not only this, but also maintain balance in life, furthermore, work with team substantially is good example to cope with people, handle them in the future and take cognitive and intuitive decision without hesitation.
In conclusion, I believe that to get complete person , hence, guardians and institutions are wholeheartedly responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46540880503 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00492744318 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9315892182 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4615384615 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185043872605 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612401308347 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295503306569 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881674148858 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386076708127 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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