some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that parents should play the role in teaching children to become a good member in society. Others agree that the role is of school. Each view has its own reasons and I agree with both the ideas.
On the one hand, the fact that kids are not mature enough to understand wrong or right things enables their parents taking the training role. Parents need to show their children to act as a good citizen. The reason is that parents are always behind their kids, orient them everything they should do. Thus, when their kids do something wrong, their mother or father should explain to them so that they know they are wrong. In contrast, when children do something good, parents should give them some encouragement to develop those good actions. These actions can significantly contribute to the development of a child and help his or her to be a good person.
On the other hand, school should also take the role in training young people to become a good citizen in society. Because, schools, with its primary role, have the tasks to provide their students not only academic knowledge but also social behaviour to become good members. By using a vast range of subjects taught for youngsters, the role of schools in teaching children is improved. For example, in primary schools in Vietnam, they not only teach some subjects such as mathematics, reading, but provide other subjects to introduce moral lessons. The lessons show young people the ways to become a good pupil in schools and an excellent child in families. Being trained with those lessons, children will understand everything they should do and should avoid doing to become a good member in society.
In conclusion, both parents and schools should play their integral roles in guiding and teaching children to become good members in wherever they live.
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- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree orr disagree with this statement. 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91318327974 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3961349205 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501607717042 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.240817656 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297369005241 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116524063318 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899628967098 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223905161619 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663005760102 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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