In present days,there is an argument about which way should be more beneficial for getting skills.Is working in a team better than working alone?I think working with team is better than working individual.In my essay I will discuss the reason in detail.
To begin with,inevitably people need to participate in group activities.Human is a social being.so,he must know how to behave in society .By participating in group activities,one can learn how to follow rules,and work as a team.Sports activities teach us co-operation,and respect others rights,and so on.In other words,we always get support from team members and that’s gives us lots of confidence.we can learn more skills and gain knowledge from others.
Secondly,when we do team activities, we realised that communication skills are most important.Team work is always gives us good advice that,what we do and how to do.for example,A recent study of Hindustan Tribune showed that,a person who had attached with different teams,is a more active and skilled.
In conclusion,I believe that group activities improve the intellectual of an individual.Team activities are definitely a best teacher of life skills,then solo activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59116022099 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4518318333 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.260094528 49.4020404114 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.0 106.682146367 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.25 20.7667163134 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06120827912 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192695335646 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10961091198 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651222242905 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10961091198 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651222242905 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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