It is irrefutable, competition has become inevitable of mankind's life. Some people reckon that competition is useful for children and it should be encouraged, but others think that co-operate become more useful for adults. I will delineate briefly in subsequent paragraphs.
Masses who are favouring with former notion, opine that students could easily achieve their goals by this. Since, nowadays the competition between individuals are increasing day by day. Hence, if a sense of competition in children should be improved, then they could start to do more hard-work to complete their work and give their best. To epitome, now learners could effortlesly get success as compared to past, owing to the competition.
Conversely, individuals who consider that co-operation become more helpful in adults, their predomiant reason is they could get wide range of knowledge because different masses have different mind whenever they do work in group then they get more ideas and boost their knowledge.
According to my point of view, the sense of co-operation has become more benefical for individuals, because masses easily fulfil their work with the assist of other individuals.
To recapitulate, having discussed the both views, it could be concluded that children who are taught to co-operate become more useful adults due to unity and team work skill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uld easily achieve their goals by this. Since, nowadays the competition between indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, conversely, hence, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42924528302 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83714161658 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.196651003 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354347811823 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133848310528 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144401118646 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213971558679 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120293796299 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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