Many individuals argue that games and sports involving physical violence, such as mixed martial arts, Karate, should not be broadcasted on television and excluded from sporting competitions at the international level. I certainly disagree with the above notion and believe that such sports help people to stay healthy and learn other useful things, like self-defence and anger control.
There are different games that require a lot of physical strength to compete with an opponent, and often involve aggressive behaviour, like in combative sports; players punch each other in order to gain points. Such physical activities require a lot of stamina and sheer dedication to fight, with discipline and punctuality, players practice all day and night to win the competition. This benefits the players to stay exceptionally healthy and fit at body, and they live a disciplined life. For instance, there are many international boxing players, such as Vijender Singh, who has won many boxing titles, and his boxing lifestyle helped him to win the title of the fittest man on the planet in the year 2018.
Apart from this, people can learn self-defence from sports that involve violence. They can learn to deal with extremely difficult situations that require them to think calmly and protect themselves from the threat. Secondly, individuals can learn to control their anger from these games, many schools and sports authorities, which provide a platform for students to learn these sports, encourage individuals to practice meditation and to control and strengthen their minds. One of the famous female boxing champions, Mary Kom, for example, is seen as a role model by many women. She is widely popular for giving motivational speeches on self-defence and making such sports a part of our lives.
In a nutshell, some individuals think that the games which involve physical excessive use of force are detrimental for people and should be completely banned. I totally oppose this viewpoint as combative sports are imperative for better health, spreading awareness on self-defence, and anger control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35347432024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81004447982 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4913676915 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.307692308 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261337808505 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954200177908 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090363567937 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169438688825 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789604730171 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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