Whether private secondary school is beneficial or not is questionable to people in today's world. Some people believe that students can benefit a lot by going to private schools. Some other people hold the view that they can cause damage to the society. In my view, I think the benefit outweigh its disatvantages.
Some people think private schools help students get better academic performance. Private schools commonly have a few students in a class. This enables teathers to pay more attention to help students stress their problems. Therefore, students are more likely to get great hang of the content of courses. Particularly, those students who are not interested in studying can get more enthusiasm with teathers' instruction and concern. Consequently, with the detailed guidance in private schools, students can end up with good grades and make acievements in the future.
However, some people argue that private schools are responsible for the gap between the rich and the poor. The expenditure for the entrance to private schools are usually high. This means only those students from well-off backgrounds are able to enjoy good education facilities and teachers. As a result, those who are rich are well-educated and have apromising future, but most of the students from disadvantaged family will fail to gain bachelar degree and end up with unemplyment. Such cases can have adverse effect on the society because the poor cannot find a way to get rid of poverty.
In my view, students can develope better behaviours with guidance in private school. Since students in such schools are focused by teachers. Their bad behaviours can be constrained once discoverd. For example, students who used to be violent will be taught to stay friendly and kind to others. Drinking, smoking can also be eliminated by stiff regulations in pravate school, so a more harmonious society will be built thanks to discipline in private schools. In contrast, in other public schools, students are less likely to be under such restrictions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...viours with guidance in private school. Since students in such schools are focused by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in contrast, of course, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2012195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80847462944 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5627694784 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2380952381 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363977198385 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117643116355 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811307109241 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235068452535 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828280822808 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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