Many people argued that they should retain all their incomes rather than paying some of them to the Government as taxes. However I completely disagree with this statement as paying taxes is a moral duty of each individual.
For a variety of reasons, it would be undoubtedly wrong to refuse to pay taxes to the state. Firstly, as there is a limitation to what an individual can achieve on their own, the development of the country and the betterment of the society such as renovating the social infrastucture or strengthening the national security and defense all come within the purview of responsibility of the country. Therefore, inhabitants are in charge of paying the share of money for the state budget. Secondly, the well-off people usually pay more taxes than the low income group, thereby, the balance of the society can be maintained in a fair way. Thus, the gap between the rich and the poor can be effectively narrowed, which positively advantages for both the economic and politicial stability of the country.
In addition to this, civilians will reap a wealth of benefits when the Government has the funds to spend on vital issues. First and foremost, the proceeds from taxes could be used to fund some form of social welfare services, which allows every social member to receive financial assistance, particularly the poor. For instance, by allocating these funds to education, underprivileged children could have opportunities of being provided with free entry to schools, thus eradicating illiteracy and shaking off the poverty. Moreover, in the future, the money they had paid in taxes would return to them as the retirement pension and health care, which allows subjects to enjoy and benefit some personal facilities from the Government. Thus, citizens are real beneficiaries when taxation systerm is effectively operated. If people keep their earning for themselves and ignore this civic duty, they will encounter more risks when they get older.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is the responsibility for every single citizen to pay taxes to the state and this would not only be advantageous for individuals but also contribute to the well-being of the country.
- In a global economy, many goods, including what we use on a daily basis, are transported from other countries in a long distance. To what extent do you think its benefits exceed its drawbacks? 89
- The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- the diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water 77
- the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003-2006. 89
- Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ome of them to the Government as taxes. However I completely disagree with this stateme...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fair way" with adverb for "fair"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...alance of the society can be maintained in a fair way. Thus, the gap between the rich and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12011173184 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88977112057 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572625698324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5646748036 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.928571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177305875822 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634229298654 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497115299918 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116316048446 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502902674468 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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