Some psychologists recommend that it is important to overcome stress by spending time do nothing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that if you are not engaged in an activity, it would reduce some kind of nervousness. I strongly disagree that keeping free all the things would certainly increase more tension.
Firstly, our mind is able to perform multiple tasks at a time. Keeping them busy in the work would overcome many problems because concentration on a task can be feasible to decrease much stress in our surroundings. Furthermore, it also helps us to not divert from any interruption and leads to complete the work in a more precise way.
Secondly, taking physical exercises regularly would definitely reduce huge stress from our daily life. Involving in these exercises like cardio, running yoga meditation etc. make a good impact on our health and keep us physically and mentally fit. For example, 40 % of people in the US live their lives happily by engaging in these activities.
On the other hand, spending quality time with your family would also help to overcome many physiological barriers as you can share your personal as well as professional issues with your loved ones. It surely releases some sort of anxiety and makes you feel better and relax. For instance, a research illustrates that hiding secrets and problems from others make us weaker.
To recapitulate, I believe that people should maintain their daily physical routine in order to minimize stress and keep the focus on their goal. If they set a vision, they will try to achieve in that thing and does not go in wrong directions which create emotional and cognitive problems. If they neglect these troubles, a significant change would be seen in their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95255474453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6704777175 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1383760319 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984698982065 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297241550963 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322278127646 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532334712836 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335145846519 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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