Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much Why do people take part in dangerous sports Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own e

I would like to account for reasons for participation
I would like to account for the reasons for participation

the incredible inventions of safety measures like as medical treatments and the special equipments
the incredible inventions of safety measures such as the medical treatments and special equipments

some countries are lack of adventurous sports players
some countries lack adventurous sports players

Definitions of lack
noun
the state of being without or not having enough of something.
the case was dismissed for lack of evidence
synonyms: absence, want, need, deficiency, dearth, insufficiency, shortage, shortfall, scarcity, paucity, unavailability, deficit
verb
be without or deficient in.
the novel lacks imagination
synonyms: be without, be in need of, need, be lacking, require, want, be short of, be deficient in, be bereft of, be low on, be pressed for, have insufficient, be strapped for

sports have become part and parcel of everyone's life. Sports authorities, administration and individual should share joint responsibility to control the darker side of the threatening sports.
sports have become the part and parcel of everyone's life. Sports authorities, administration and individual should share joint responsibilities to control the darker side of the threatening sports.

Sentence: Initially, offering special training classes to the players before being professional in such games could be a reliable panacea to take over injuries caused by the ventures games.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to ventures and games

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The verb "Emphasize" does not have any prepositions.
"Further emphasising on my point of view"
I believe that "on" should be omitted.
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