Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like the very much Why do people take part in dangerous sports Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers

Majority of people like extremely dangerous sports such as the Motor bike racing, grand prix, kick boxing, snow skiing, aerobics etc. People have a predilection towards such dangerous sports for the thrill and experience they receive. Sports and athletics have never been without straining the physical being, that can sometimes result in physical impairment. However, people are very much inclined towards the adventurous side of these sports.
One of the reason is "Adrenaline rush" that can be attributed to the reason behind the profound likeness for such hazardous sports. The rush inside the human body can elevate the person to involve in such sports activities that keeps the equilibrium inside the sportsperson. The other reason could be the innate ability of the people to participate in such sports. The inbuilt power and the morphology of such people paves way for them to involve in such vulnerable sports. Further, few people are lured by the trophies, awards, recognitions, sponsors, wealth, paparazzi they acquire out of achieving success in the field of sports.
It is of much importance to deal with the implementation of precautions for such sports. Protocols need to be designed in such a way that there must be immediate rescue team to handle the person who invited injuries. There must be a team of community helpers to safeguard the persons immediately. Thorough body examinations can be implemented for such hazardous players after the race, so that there can be a prescience about the acquired minor and major injury like fractures or life threatening phenomena.
To conclude with, People are willing to risk their lives for the thrill they feel in their life. However, safety measures, precautionary actions and frequent body check ups are much required to assuage the physical pain and any injury acquired.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26101694915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81275054743 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1261711236 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177741176551 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682102205022 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678629853606 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11429226684 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101014294258 0.056905535591 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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