It is true that, in this contemporary era, watching television is being escalating among people these days. Some introspect that it is essential to teach people about social issues by tv programmes. According to my perspective, I am totally agree with that programmes should educate public the value of social issues.
To start with, firstly, when all the tv programmes would give some information about social issues so people would more aware about what is happening these days and all things in our surroundings. Secondly, children watch television very carefully so when entertainment channels teach or explain something so they give lots of attention on it rather than asking from their parents. Furthermore, that is why parents could take some rest after their work instead of teaching their children. For example, last week when I went to market for purchasing sanitizer at that time shopkeeper was giving me duplicate sanitizer but I was aware about that thing because I had taken that knowledge from entertainment tv programmes after that I replaced my product.
Looking on the other view, there are lots of reason that it may be not good to provide social issues things on tv programmes. Firstly, when small children watch that things again and again they would feel bore and wouldn't watch that programmes again. Secondly, they may be afraid regarding kidnapping, robbery, murders, after that they would feel scare when they would go alone anywhere. For instance, one small child live in my neighborhood and he afraid alot to go anywhere outside from his own home alone. In addition, that is also not beneficial.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly giving information through all divertissement tv programmes it is not mandatory because children may be go in overthinking about social issues yet, we must understand that social education is must for children by programmes. Moreover, I totally agree with that wrong things are happening and we should aware children as well as parents too about social issues.
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- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well Do you agree or disagree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...cording to my perspective, I am totally agree with that programmes should educate pub...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...gain and again they would feel bore and wouldnt watch that programmes again. Secondly, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1641337386 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78764005489 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5854728221 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267674555744 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968627710547 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978693371211 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183461850929 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857989154402 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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