It is true that, in this contemporary era, traveling is being popular among many people. Many individuals introspect that students must go abroad for learning new language and customs. However, in my consideration, it is a beneficial way for students to learn everything about different nation.
To start with, there are numerous examples behind this. Firstly, when students go any abroad country so they would know more things about their culture because when they would live there and speak in their native language so they can learn easily. Moreover, they would able to collect more information and their all things would highly reliable. For example, if people would go abroad so they will have to learn some basic words for communication with retailers so they would learn easily as compared to read books and so on.
Looking at the other view, nowadays we do not need to go anywhere for collecting information about any country. In addition, people do not have more time these days so they do not want to spend their time on wasteful things. Almost all people prefer internet for learning any language or about customs. Facebook, instagram, skype, youtube e.t.c so many apps are available in which people can easily talk with any native people without any problem as well as this is free. For example, Wiis very good web page on internet and it provides all the information about biography of any person, fashion, culture and so on. In just one click.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly more platforms are available in which people can read and know all things in free yet. We must understand that if, students go in any abroad country so it is good and their all Information are highly reliable rather than internet or books.
- With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems do this cause for society and the family 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 78
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negative development 89
- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51812162385 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4074883692 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112264179683 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438849952249 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451665519753 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820848142183 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377788768883 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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