Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online.Is this a positive or negative development?

Online education is a new trend and thousands of educational institutions have already started adapting to the online study. However, there are some disadvantage with online education, but the advantages far outweigh the demerits. I would discuss both the views of this argument.

To begin with, many universities in the developed countries started educating the children with online courses only after complete and proper research. The material provided in online courses is prepared by professional teachers and experts, so the quality of the education offered by these is good. Moreover, it also helps to provide education to the house-wives and elderly people who could not complete their degrees in their stipulated time period. The registration an also be completed quickly online without wasting any time in travelling to long distances to pay the fee. Many students started studying in Khan academy, unacademy and udemy, which are reputed online educational platforms.

On the other hand, there are some disadvantages with this online education such as money and lack of supervision and motivation by teacher. Some universities demand very huge amounts of money for online courses, which cannot be met by poor students. The motivation provided by teachers in traditional classrooms is packing in online classrooms. However, teachers motivation is a major requisite for any student to acheive success in his academic career.

I conclude that online courses have both merits and demerits. However, the merits acquired by these courses outweigh the demerits and so i would recommend online courses to those who w can support themselves financially.

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49609375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89081238835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9317671779 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153502582921 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538120904907 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422218688017 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907752975428 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385523789045 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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