In the current era, one of the most debated issue is about scarcity of foods. It is evident that many advancements are made in context of agriculture to increase its productivity, but there are many people who could not fulfil their need of foods. This essay will discuss the causes of shortage of food grains and it also discuss how to fix this problem.
To begin with, there are several causes of food shortage. The first and foremost aspect to point out in this context is the population irruption. The population in world increased at very high pace and we have only a limited amount of lands to satisfy the needs of society. There are various infrastructural facilities are needed to live better life, which demolished agricultural land to build infrastructural facilities, such as housing facilities, industrial areas, and many more. The second point in this regard is that after having innovation and technical advancement in field of various streams, it is necessary to have enough knowledge about how to use that technology to increase productivity of land, due to that many farmers cannot get maximum benefits from their land to cultivate extra food for society.
On the other hand, there are a number of solutions, which helps the society to satisfy their hungriness. Firstly, the government of country should imposed certain taxes and legal requirements before converting agricultural land into industrial land, which is likely to reduces the ratio of conversion of agricultural land to industrial land. To illustrate, in many countries, the owner, who wants to establish industry on agricultural land, have to receive "No objection certificate" from the government to built their factory. Secondly, the governments should spread awareness about how to gain maximum benefits from limited lands with the help of technologies by collective action with local NGOs and other institutions.
To conclude, the growth of population and lack of knowledge about latest advancements are the main two reasons about not earn maximum output from limited land, which ultimately leads to a problem of scarcity of food. To solve this problem, the government should have to be strict.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'discusses'?
Suggestion: discusses
... of shortage of food grains and it also discuss how to fix this problem. To begin wi...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...wth of population and lack of knowledge about latest advancements are the main two reasons a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24431818182 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94091589679 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7210691334 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16527085194 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604593542599 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469526725435 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121950426092 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503031433948 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'discusses'?
Suggestion: discusses
... of shortage of food grains and it also discuss how to fix this problem. To begin wi...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...wth of population and lack of knowledge about latest advancements are the main two reasons a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24431818182 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94091589679 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7210691334 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16527085194 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604593542599 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469526725435 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121950426092 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503031433948 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.