Nowadays, although the science of farming is getting raised, plenty of people get hungry and starvation is being high noticeable.in this essay the explanation of both reasons and solutions are remarkable.
Some parts of the world face with an intense terrible circumstances about the food industries. Indeed, Lack of nutrients as well as ingredients in food puts a strain specially in Africa. Furthermore, Precisely speaking, Take an example with less developed countries, For instance Kenya. Its inhabitants suffer from extreme famine. One of the most effective reasons is lack of experience at agriculture. First and foremost, Incorrect political decisions lead agriculture to face with some sorts of bad conditions. In addition, government doesn’t take care of advanced consumption area. If it does, They export consumption in order to get rich.
In my opinion, Government has the most responsibility throughout this issue. Indeed, Hiring plenty of Well-sophisticated persons at farming might solve these inferior circumstances. Also, Job opportunities should be increased and as a result the poverty as well as dropping the power of purchase will be demolished. Consequently, Starvation in the counties where suffer from poverty will be diminished.
In conclusion, Starvation has been getting rising in global nowadays and it stems from hard situations like War, Jobless and the Lack of water in order to grow a plant. All governments should give their hand together and try to overcome on these severities conditions.
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Suggestion: circumstance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56837606838 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24131424749 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0191065479 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951862148033 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270774232272 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325571363215 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542711810113 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361191500495 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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