Studying with a group of scholar in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.
There are conflicting views among people whether studying with peers in the lecture room is advantageous or acquiring online is better. This essay will highlight both viewpoints and explain why I believe that group study is far beneficial, but since the COVID-19 pandemic has emerged online study is greatly helping the students.
To start with, there are several positives of doing group study in the tutorial room. The first reason to supports this notion is that students will have chances to do face to face interaction with classmates, as well as they, have to obey the classroom's decorum that will certainly make them more disciplined. Whereas, in online class students may be involved in different works at the same time which can distract them from their study. Secondly, in a lecture hall, students get to follow versatile learning methods. Whenever they face any difficulty in a particular subject, they can take help from other students to clear the doubt. Lastly, a physical presence in the classroom provides numerous opportunities to develop their social skills as well as coordination with peers. For example, if a student attends only online classes from his or her home they may not be mixed up with their classmates, consequently, they will become less social and introverts which are not good for their career perspectives.
On the other hand, an online class can be useful in some aspects such as students will not have to travel some considerable distance to attend lectures. While it will reduce their daily travelling expenses which they pay for transports service. Furthermore, the bad weather condition will not affect their schedules. In case if there is heavy rain pupil can take advantage of online sessions while being at their home. For example, last summer several students went back to their hometowns just before the lockdown was imposed, but the zoom video calling app allowed them to attend all subjects classes online. Moreover, the significant advantage of an online class is that the children will be under parent's observation whether they are focusing on their study or not.
In conclusion, although group study in the classroom is indispensable in student learning yet online classes playing a significant role during this second lockdown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'classrooms'' or 'classroom's'?
Suggestion: classrooms'; classroom's
...ates, as well as they, have to obey the classrooms decorum that will certainly make them m...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l certainly make them more disciplined. Whereas, in online class students may be involv...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class'?
Suggestion: class
...ctives. On the other hand, an online class can be useful in some aspects such as s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07932011331 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60706970165 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0788587377 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223517947385 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846569110845 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897237675528 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191975781021 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132227351393 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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