successful people whether it is sports stars or movie actors always inspires younger generation. I completely agree with this statement because of the reasons mentioned below.
To begin with, people who work in the glamorous fields like sports and movie industry inspires youngsters mainly because of their fame. The fame they acquired from their performances makes them stands out in the crowd. Another point is, movies and sports are mostly seen by youngsters thus, stars from both areas familiar for them. Although politicians and scientists handle an important role than these stars, they are not familiar for youngsters because they handle issues which have no entertainment. Moreover, the attractive faces and well built body of these stars always a hot topic in discussion between youngsters and they are eager to know the diet and exercise they follow.For example, the six pack body of Salman khan in his recent film talked a lot by youngsters in Indian collages.
Furthermore, some stars came from a poor background and their hard work and dedication in work also a major factor in achieving success. These real stories from life also help them in being popular among youngsters. For example, a south Indian Tamil superstar Rajinikanth started his life as a bus conductor, his dedication and determination made him Indian superstar. Finally, the money they get apart from their salary is a huge amount in which they can lead life like a king. This lavish life always a dream for youngsters which they want to live in future.
To conclude, it can be undoubtedly say that film stars and sport stars have a high influence on youngsters life .Thus, they should behave properly in public and lead exemplary life so that youngsters also will follow that.
- Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is benificial for tham. why?What are the possible solutions to envourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport? 73
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wher 67
- Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is benificial for tham. why?What are the possible solutions to envourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport? 73
- Some people believe that crime rate can be reduced by giving a long punishment, while others say there are alternate ways to reduce crime. Discuss both ways and give your opinion. 56
- It is important for children to learn the different between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?What sort of punishment should parents and t 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Successful
successful people whether it is sports stars or mo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... know the diet and exercise they follow.For example, the six pack body of Salman k...
^^^
Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...follow.For example, the six pack body of Salman khan in his recent film talked a ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lot by youngsters in Indian collages. Furthermore, some stars came from a poo...
^^
Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Furthermore, some stars came from a poor background and their hard work and ...
^^
Line 4, column 553, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... for youngsters which they want to live in future. To conclude, it can be undoubtedly...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...nd sport stars have a high influence on youngsters life .Thus, they should behave properly...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have a high influence on youngsters life .Thus, they should behave properly in pub...
^^
Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ve a high influence on youngsters life .Thus, they should behave properly in public ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that youngsters also will follow that.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07216494845 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60235265583 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0382555374 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199770763215 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712590777642 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558103131519 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13427358455 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330607607245 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.