Interpersonal skills like effective communication, problem solving, decision making and conflict management are very important to succeed in business. But, a lot of corporate houses complain that the new batch of young employees lack these basic skills. This essay will discuss the main causes of this problem and suggest possible solutions to overcome this issue.
To begin with, there are multiple reasons for the lack of soft skills in the new candidates, but the two main reasons are the current education system and the lack of focus on interpersonal skills. The education system lacks a syllabus that incorporates soft skills as a main subject, it is always treated as a voluntary subject and more emphasis is laid upon the technical studies like Math and Science. To exemplify, if there is a class on developing communication skills, it will prepare the students to translate their knowledge and ideas effectively.
However, the two main solutions to surpass this issue are to implement a course on personality development, effective communication, decision making etc as a part of the curriculum. Secondly, the parents need to provide their children practical training by giving them daily tasks to manage the household activities like buying the groceries, managing and dealing with the domestic help and vendors. For example, a recent study confirms that parents who made their children manage the household activities like buying groceries and dealing with the vendors improved their decision making capacity and communication skills. Such activities enabled them to become better negotiators and communicators.
To conclude, many businesses find their new talent to be lacking interpersonal skills mainly due to the existing educational system and more emphasis on technical studies. However, this essay suggested that by implementing vocational training courses in schools and practical training by parents at home can enhance the personality of the young adults and prepare them for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95189316491 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9997044908 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.5 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278421939728 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968638284339 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637052021524 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171243030172 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670197618356 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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