Teenagers should not be allowed to use cell phones at school.To what extent do you agreed or disagree.
Adolescent should not be permitted to use cell phones at educational centre.I strongly agree with this notion because it distracts their focus on study and peer pressure by bullying.
The main reason is that use of smartphones at school by teenagers can effect their education, the reason is that,they deeply involve to using it and never well concert ration on lecture which deliverer by teachers, due to this, they get lower scores in exams.In addition to this, a majority of adolescents utilities mobile devices in wrong ways like cheating in exam, blackmail to their classmates and so on, that is why they enter in crime world.For example, a 13 year old school girl committed sucidie , due to blackmail her cheating on social aap with her boyfriend by her class not mate boy.
The another reason is that it is increasing bullying among teenagers they have peer pressure when they see that their another classmate have a latest smartphone with many features, due to this, they give burden on their parents to want it as well as some mother and father have not able and have not their budget to buy it for their children. Moreover, it is also responsible for cyber crime among adolescents because they perform many criminal activities. For example,a report which given by media tells that 75% juveniles have their own mobile phones.
In conclusion, although,school should not be give permission to teenagers to use cell phones in the classroom because they distract from study as well as influences to see other classmates have their own latest mobile phones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98091603053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63179403342 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.319795185 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.5 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143063520939 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873783398561 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093986713051 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130115267135 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880226888452 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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