There are some motive For people tou work.Some people think that money is most important . Do you agree or disagree
Undoubtedly money play vital role in people life if persons have money they can fulfill their basic needs. But few masses have their goal other people to work.However some individuals think that money is everything for them . I would like to discuss both view in following pharagraphs.
To embark with , it is universally acknowledge that Money is not a god but not less than god so most of people prefer to earn money because they want to fulfill their basice needs and with the help of money they can make their kith and kins future .so tha they also get success in future .Moreover, with the help of money persons can uplift the standerd of life . Some persons are kind heart if those have a lot of money then they may charity and help poor people so that poverty will reduce . This is the main reason why people work only for money .
On the other hand. Every persons have their different choice in their life so that work for satisfaction not for money this is because when they are not satisfy with that job they can not concentrate on their work .If persons have any kind of goal or aim then definitely het success that work along with they get good money that work because if individual work carefully then they enhance the work and produce the goods with the help of that goods they can get money and enjoy their life.
To sum up ,it is true that money is important for people but somehow persons aim and satisfaction also important because money is also compulsory to fulfill basic needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, kind of, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54612546125 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2159225978 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464944649446 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.666495989 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.888888889 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245774608491 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132504032038 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896225845151 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185108379791 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042305567459 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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