Human being is destroying the earth's environment tremendously. There are several ways they are causing the increase of temperature all across the globe. However, some measures can be taken to lessen the rise of temperature.
To begin with, the major reason of the rise of temperature is the pollution creating by industries and factories. To illustrate, there are thousands of production industries in China, Korea, India, which are producing billions of tons of toxic gas. This gas create carbon dioxide in the air which prevent the sun power to return. Consequently, the world is having loads of temperature with time and being hotter. Furthermore, the deforestation also responsible for the rising warm in the globe. Trees keep weather calm and comfortable by releasing oxygen and taking carbon dioxide. Nonetheless, cutting of trees and jungle lessen the release of oxygen and increasing carbon dioxide. As a result of this, the globe is getting less oxygen and being warm day by day.
On the other hand, there are some means that can be taken to tackle this problem. Firstly, in the factories, and industries, they should recycle the gases to make it sustainable or reuse the emitted gas in other works. For example, a company in Bangladesh use a machine which make the toxic gas Eco-friendly so that the environment stay safe from the potential affects. Therefore, the environment of this area is so good and it is not making the earth warmer. Another
solution that should be put into practice is that implying some rules for cutting the trees. Government should give permission to a particular authorities to maintain cutting down trees and expand awareness to plant more and more trees. Thus, there will be less deforestation and will grow more trees.
In conclusion, people are making the entire globe hotter by releasing carbon dioxide and cutting down trees. However, to tackle this, company can use machine to make gases sustainable before emitting in the environment, and more and more plant should be planted along with less deforestation.
- Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 88
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
Human being is destroying the earths environment tremendously. There are sev...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
...billions of tons of toxic gas. This gas create carbon dioxide in the air which prevent...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is not making the earth warmer. Another solution that should be put into practic...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'authority'?
Suggestion: authority
... should give permission to a particular authorities to maintain cutting down trees and expa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12759643917 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79916501488 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507418397626 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4615241207 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177733334633 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550827236625 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407584209029 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990618937152 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197260309962 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.