These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A school of thought holds the view that following doctors and medicine is beneficial for their health. While I believe that people should go to see the doctor on a regular basis, I agree with the viewpoint that people should have their own healthy lifestyles.
On the one hand, proponents of the idea that doctors hold the priority role in taking care of their health tend to point out a combination of reasons. First and foremost, the number of well-trained doctors has witnessed a significant rise in recent years, accompanied by the rapid development of healthcare technology. As a result, people are likely to have a stronger belief in physicians and medicine that they can treat all patients' problems. Another compelling reason is that doctors may have some effective advice and particular prescriptions, which makes people feel safer. It is because people think that they just need to follow these things to have better health.
On the other hand, I advocate for those who believe that having a healthy lifestyle will help them be stronger. The primary rationale is that when people use the medicine, there may have some bad side effects, which can do harm to them. Consequently, if a person uses it for a long time, it may have a detrimental impact on his health. Furthermore, it is very easy to have a healthy lifestyle without costing anything. For instance, you can exercise, eat healthy food including vegetables or drink enough water. Not only can these actions help you to improve your physical health but they also better your mental health.
In conclusion, both sides are justifiable. However, on balance, I strongly reckon that a healthy lifestyle plays a vital role in protecting and improving people’s health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00346020761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74702131844 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8973929141 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259382365499 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840189026281 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521637248167 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163072427869 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468546352058 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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