In this contemporary world, it is a reality that today in several families both parents need to work. However, some people find it beneficial for young ones, while others believe children will suffer due to lack of parental support. Here, I shall scrutinise both sides of this assertion with a proper verdict at last.
Admittedly, nowadays expenses had elevated so the additional income will definitely be helpful. First of all, children will get better education and other amenities, which can rise their standard of living. They can get enrolled in the best institutions and have quality of education, which will increase their career opportunities, since this is an era of competition. Now, employers like to recruit people with high academic and practical skills thus this is only possible by studying in finest schools. But, these schools are highly expensive and an ordinary man cannot afford it. Hence, for betterment of juveniles, it become necessary for both parents to work.
Nevertheless, despite of merits it has few drawbacks as well. Firstly, kids are left alone at home or with care takers. They have free will to do anything like watching television whole day, playing online games and using social media which consequently changes their conduct. Children becomes anti social and rude, they lack in moral and ethical values. To illustrate, recent research have shown that students with working parents were more aggressive as compared to their counterparts. Moreover, using excess of gadgets leds to health related issues such as weak eyesight, obesity and mental sickness. Deducing, not usually exta money is imperative as for child to be a noble person parental support is must.
In my opinion, as I aforementioned this phenomenon brings numerous disadvantage. So, authorities should allocate some funds to guardians for development of their children. This will assist them financially and they can spend more time together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the finest'.
Suggestion: in the finest
... thus this is only possible by studying in finest schools. But, these schools are highly ...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... Hence, for betterment of juveniles, it become necessary for both parents to work. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as for, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31715210356 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75895994012 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686084142395 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7549548936 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4736842105 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249395689459 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687707184556 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770323397222 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152427104947 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853472669582 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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