Climate change is becoming the principal danger threatens human survival in this century and ocean levels are dramatically rising at waring rates. In this essay, I intend to explore problem to stem this phenomenon along with possible solution to it.
Chief among the results associating with this is the flooding of people’s residences. Millions of people are distributed in coastal areas, where the sea levels creeping up happen frequently. If tidal appeared in those places, it would not only damage villagers ’s property but also cause the death of freshwater creatures. As a consequence, experts found out a temporary way called shelter, which led to resident’s homeless and increased migration proportion rapidly. Furthermore, the destruction of devastation could be clear for all to see during the 2011 Tsunami in Japan.
In order to resolve this inundation with water would be to build flood defenses. Food barriers such as dams, dikes and flood gates should be constructed along coasts and waterways with hey criteria of qualifiable requirement. One of the foremost benefit is that it could prevent the rise of waves, thereby stopping the water reaching populated areas. Netherlands, for instance, is the country with the most lowest latitude of the world, has successfully employed various flood defense systems.
In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that solution is likely to improve the flood prevention techniques. In order to avoid this watery catastrophe, countries with sea border could ultilize Holland ’s systems as possible.
- In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those school leavers' decision. Give your own opinion. 77
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 61
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. 87
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'lowest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: lowest
..., for instance, is the country with the most lowest latitude of the world, has successfully...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the lowest'.
Suggestion: most the lowest
..., for instance, is the country with the most lowest latitude of the world, has successfully...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47791164659 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93211198439 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670682730924 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4122219404 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199544905145 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667883778628 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609271027614 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129452300496 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831900185903 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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