In recent years, rapidly expanding tourism is gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world. Most importantly, it has been a bone of contention among the critics regarding its impact on a country. While some people feel that it has several downsides on a particular tourist destination, I would contend that it has multifarious benefits too.
On the one hand, it is inevitable that tourism ensures an exponential economic growth of any country. Therefore, encouraging tourism means bolstering the economy. This means, preparing a country as a holiday destination opens a lot of business opportunities to the young startups. This includes professional expansion of resort business, upgradation of transport facilities as well as patronizing large-scale entertainment facilities. Moreover, for a given country, eventually, it provides a global identity and it becomes the hotspot for a mixed bag of people from different parts of the world. This can be exemplified by the well-known tourism sectors in Thailand. This is one of the predominant reasons for which Bangkok is now known globally. A survey conducted last year in Bangkok represents that their economy has been boosted by 32% soon after the appearance of Pattaya and Phuket in the top list as a tourist attraction which is really appreciable.
Conversely, some people are also worried about the exploitation of the native culture that solely belongs to that place. Thus, there is little chance that own culture might be somewhat adapted with the influence of the incoming tourists. Besides, with the unregulated tourism, certain heritage might face sheer chances to be damaged by the inundating rush of tourists, particularly in long vacations. The Cox’sbazar, for instance, is the second largest sandy sea beach in the world are now facing tremendous pressure to handle plastic trash that now fades away the beauty to some extent. Additionally, some people want to do short-term cheap business with the tourists by cheating them with higher prices even for a simple one dollar souvenir. This sometimes sends a negative signal to the visiting people and deter them from revisiting. However, these simple negatives can easily be addressed by proper monitoring and strong involvement from the government end.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly tourism is an opportunity for any country to make their financial condition a robust one. To me, the advantages actually outnumber the negatives and it should always be considered as developmental scope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, conversely, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40101522843 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07268070149 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611675126904 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8186461947 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106154074942 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368082101695 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583962012269 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694012272194 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318637149485 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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