This is a fact that tourism has a great contribution to the economic growth of the nation. According to my opinion tourism brings more benefits than its drawbacks and I am going to discuss the advantages of tourism.
The primary merit of touristy is growth in the economic resources of the country as every nation has its own worth seeing places such as historical places, magnificent buildings and architecture and other natural spots that attract visitors from other nations who visit the country and spend money in exchange for seeing the place and also buy souvenirs for their family and friends that brings economic growth in the nation. Secondly, exploring other places are important for increasing knowledge about other cultures and norms that provides opportunity to interact with other people that brings people close to each other. Finally, if there would be tourist places then people could be able to get employment in this sector as it provides jobs to people and many people works as tourist guides which does not only meet their dream of working in this sector but also they can earn bread and butter by earning money. Moreover, tourism provides funds for either education or other public services.
However, the tourism has a few demerits along with its merits. Firstly, despite of having safety procedures, sometimes it becomes difficult to dispose of the waste created by people coming from other countries as some people do not care about the cleanliness and safety and throw the plastic bottles and cans over there instead of dumping in the trashcans. What is more, they think that this clean up is the responsibility of the people who are working on that place and they do not care about that.
To conclude, Although tourism has several benefits yet many drawbacks are attached to this which are not good for the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99032258065 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4346804913 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551612903226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.060876313 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.7 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204993932416 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985056315131 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868386934251 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158278008037 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982229938125 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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