Nowadays, it is obvious that the congestion in most countries is on the increase and cities are becoming busier. In my opinion, this problem must be tackled because it is a global issue and most people, especially who live in big cities,areaffectedbyit.
One of the main causes of traffic jams is that the majority of people prefer using their own cars instead of public transportation. However, it is not impossible to find good and effective ways to control the congestion. Public transportation is the easiest way to solve this problem. If there is comfortable and cheap public transportation such as trains and buses, people will choose to use it rather than drive. For instance, in Manchester, Stagecoach buses are the mostconvenientbuses thathelp toreducethe traffic on roadsandstreets during rush hours. In fact, governments should provide much better public transportationandchargepricesthatareaffordableforeveryone.
Another solution to solve the traffic problem is to charge a congestion fee for every car that will go into a city centre. This will either discourage people from driving into that area, or raise more money for public transportation. A good example of this situation is London, which now has a congestion charge. GoingtothecitycentreinLondoncostsabout£8perday.
In conclusion, the problem of traffic congestion can be tackled by improving publictransportationandbychargingdriverswhoentercitycentres.
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Discuss the problems and Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities. 56
- Topic 003: some people think computers and the internet are important in children’s study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 73
- According to the American film actor John Wayne “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life.” How important is it for individuals and the government about the future, rather than focusing on at the present? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , areaffectedbyit
...eople, especially who live in big cities,areaffectedbyit. One of the main causes of traffic ja...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96116504854 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.89604754691 2.80592935109 246% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2399750183 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23901902969 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798001406718 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744870232538 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159223155504 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563618520075 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.99 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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