In this modern era of civilization, man is trying to comfort his life as much as he can. Science has reached it's peak during the last century and it's journey is continue by every passing day. On the basis of equality, universities should accept equal students with respect to the gender difference, is a controversial issue but it doesn't seem possible.
To begin with, let's take the population difference between males and females. The later gender is leading with respect to the number of individuals throughout the world. And as every day is passing, this gender difference is increasing and increasing. How can they be allocated same numbers of seats when there exists a big difference regarding their numbers. For instance, in Pakistan female population is greater than male population. Now if they're given equal seats then there would be an appreciable numbers of female students who wouldn't be able to get into the universities just because equal numbers of their counter gender are allowed to get admission in that same university.
Similarly, if population difference is not kept in account, then a lot of deserving students would be unable to get admission in their desired fields which will directly affect their efficiency while working in the undesired fields. There is a lot more chance that the gender which is the leading population of the specific area, if remains illiterate because of unavailability of the seats, can get themselves involved in more crimes and wrong doings. Solution to the problem is, that seat allotment should be done according to the percentage or ratio of both the genders instead of making it 50-50. Because one gender has to suffer at the end as there always stays a population difference when it comes to gender.
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should not follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 70
- The diagram below show the life cycle of silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting main features and compare where relevant. 60
- The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012 90
- The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia 81
- It is inevitable that as technology advances traditional cultures will be lost It seems that we cannot have these two things together To what extent do you agree or disagree 96
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is greater than male population. Now if theyre given equal seats then there would be a...
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Suggestion:
...ion difference when it comes to gender.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'to begin with', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242902208202 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.179810725552 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0788643533123 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0378548895899 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0410094637224 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135646687697 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0662460567823 0.0403226058552 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77109987435 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347003154574 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0883280757098 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252365930599 0.021408717616 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018927444795 0.011925033212 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1763.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01706484642 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378839590444 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279863481229 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17747440273 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133105802048 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77109987435 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 62.0654929438 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5384615385 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3803306545 49.517814964 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.615384615 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 50.5248096613 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.71951219512 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231837102275 0.332605444948 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107231010247 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822441902114 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487511381072 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119082288661 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980404575521 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489840328068 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.431311188398 0.324371583561 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836598045077 0.0638462369009 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18369700965 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371055734326 0.058150111329 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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