Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education is a basic right for mankind in this world. For this reason, men and women should have access to the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the opinion of accepting the equal proportion of both sexes in every university subject.
Having the same proportion of male and female students on all degree courses is unrealistic because student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fulfil a course with the equal gender, it would need enough applicants to attend this subject and spend much time on college enrolment. In reality, many courses are more popular with only one gender. For example, nursing tends to attract female students rather than men, so that it would be difficult to make a balanced proportion between men and women.
Apart from practical concerns expressed above, I strongly believe that it will be wrong if universities discriminate against student due to their gender. These institutions should continue to select the best candidates for each subject according to their qualification. In this process, it is undoubtedly that both men and women have the same opportunities to attend a subject as per their individual merit that can prove that they are eligible. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on an engineering course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with a lower grade of fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should base on individual merits and qualifications, and gender should be irrelevant in accepting students. However, it would be impractical and unfair to change the selection procedure based on gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98291050855 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8283364608 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257856361569 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876679912602 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879985180411 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152761356253 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308886248424 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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