The mobile phones has become an integral part of life and life can not be imagined without mobile phones. If it is used properly i can be blessed, misuse of cell phones would be a curse. Some people are think of that using cellphones at public places should be banned because this is antisocial likewise smoking. While i believe that mobile phones should not be used at public places, it should be up to some extent.
On the one hand , there are many reasons of imposing ban on mobile devices at public places. First of all, nowadays children use phones at school, social media ca damage health of children as well as cause bullying. Also, outside the school, use of phones distracts them from healthy physical exercises and good old- fashioned play. As a consequent, children becomes lazy and unhealthy , and becomes victims of obesity in young age. So, every school should make its own policy for limiting the use of mobile phones at school. For example, according to Teacher Tapp vast majority of schools has applied their policies and the app conducts daily surveys about 85,00 teachers. It states that about half of the primary and secondary schools do mot allow phones at breaks and lunch time either. Secondly, using mobile phones in a library an disturb others as people come to read books in a library and it provides peaceful environment. On the contrary , if people talk on phones in library they creates disturbance for other people and distract their concentration. Finally, people use phones in hospitals that can interfere with the signals for other instruments over there.
On the other hand, i also support that these should not be completely banned. First of all, in case of emergencies the people have to use mobile phones as on the spot they may need to make an important call to someone. For an instance, in case of any accident in public places mobile phones can save the lives of people. Besides this, phones should not be intrusive as people can easily put phones on silent or vibrate mode that removes disturbing others. Additionally, today smart phones can do multi- function and could be used as camera or recording device. That is why should not be banned completely.
To conclude, although overuse of mobile can be devasting at public places. Yet i believe that people must allowed to use phones in emergencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83830845771 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4711177231 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534825870647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5615041785 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4090909091 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317390269525 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109684349562 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605055871943 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224276000295 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698440380875 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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