some people assume that vaccinating infants is unimportant and also,risky. In my opinion, completely disagree with that the idea of vaccine being unnecessary and even believe,it is a way to prevent various kind of infectious disease. This essay will first argue why vaccine is good for children and further discuss major consequences of vaccinating children.
firstly,vaccinating helps to prevent many infectious diseases that could be spread though air or water. There is a trend for vaccinating children in many parts of the world as it has bring more decline in death around the world. Diseases like; hepatitis, measles, etc. when vaccinated earlier are less likely to get infected from these in future. It is found more effective that any other medicine. Along with that,it prevents from amputation of arm or leg, paralysis of limbs or loss of hearing. Large number of vaccination has led to the dramatic decline in the number of several infectious disease around the world.
on the other hand, vaccination has common side effects like; irritation, swelling or redness around the injected area, slight fever and allergic reaction. However these are minor side effects and last for few days. Nevertheless, the benefits outweighs
these demerits of vaccination. perhaps, More importantly it save those to whom we care and love in a cost-effective way. Moreover, the safest way to prevent any child from infectious disease disease is through vaccination as it is approved by food and drug administration (FDA) and also, reviewed its safety regularly.
In conclusion, vaccination is a better idea to prevent child from risk to the infectious disease as it is cost-effective and safety. I believe, talking vaccination as unnecessary and dangerous is risky to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31914893617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05012366363 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58865248227 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7919864578 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2352941176 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235637337209 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742066758298 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576310214027 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138962820823 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068995282439 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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