Media has invaded every aspect of life in modern world. With the advent of new technology, people have grown addicted to TV and radio. Many people accuse it of encouraging aggressive behavior in the society. While there are other factors responsible for violence prevailing in current times, media is certainly guilty of promoting it.
It could be argued that news channels, movies and other media outlets only manifest what already exists in society. Since they are responsible for informing public about current happenings, they are forced to show criminal activities. For example, many news channels feature crimes and ongoing investigation as part of their job. Therefore, it might be unfair to blame media sources for spreading violence when they are only trying to do their job by delivering truth to public.
However, this reality cannot be ignored that media has a massive effect on public behavior. It is due to the fact that masses are heavily influenced by what they see or listen to. For example, children watching their favorite movie characters using guns attempt to follow them without thinking about consequences. Watching various action movies also give people new and creative ideas to perpetuate aggression. These days many movies are based on true stories where real life situations are screened. Such stunts are not difficult to follow and offenders often take help from such mediums to make their plans successful. Moreover, excessive screening of objectionable behavior normalizes it for masses. As a result they become desensitized and do not consider violence a problem. Needless to say such societies are devoid of morality and acts of violence become a daily news.
To conclude, although media often depicts the happenings around the world, it also helps people learning different ways of aggression and desensitize them to violence. Therefore, it would be absolutely correct to state that media is major reason of growing violence in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371395289 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2130203479 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3684210526 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209244304735 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608318206721 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687068962604 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134267863972 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217777698109 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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