Visual pollution is the of accident on road .to what extent to you agree or disagree
"If i can't be beautiful l want to be invisible " with the rise in modernization. A man has transferred his life tremendously. he has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on moon.nevertheless, there are some issues which are irrevocable and complex as ever instance, this topic asserts that visual pollution can cause ; accidents or not.through this essay. I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example and assertion and shape up my opinion by the end .I completely agree to this statement. It is clear and coherent representation.
In conclusion, as we seen there are number of answer to this question an balance , however, I trend to believe that "government due to implementation of some laws" .
To begin with, visual pollution course many types of harmful effects to everyone . Moreover, this is so dangerous condition created for every that people by their surviving . they strengthen their views point of claiming that bill board is the main course of it . However, they are advertised purpose course accidents situation for everyone that people suffer from difficulty . A good illustrate of this with a example, A survey conducted by Indian government about visual pollution . Regarding this it has survey main purpose awareness to people abouts it effects as well as, they have some suitable laws also imposed on public that following besides this, they have been gives safety.
On other side, there are group of people believe that, visual pollution effects no suitable for everyone. Subsequently, visual pollution are more cause ; on driving, walking on road. Afterthat, they can distributor all life of human. Moreover, it has incident cause of building . However, person have through building lose concentration. However, they have lack off of sense this type of incident also developed . Whereas, A survey conducted by California university about visual pollution afterthat, they can awareness harmful effects of visual pollution. However, they have gives the suitable solution for controller of visual pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
'If i cant be beautiful l want to be invisibl...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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...sserts that visual pollution can cause ; accidents or not.through this essay. I s...
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...rtion and shape up my opinion by the end .I completely agree to this statement. It...
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...any types of harmful effects to everyone . Moreover, this is so dangerous conditio...
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... every that people by their surviving . they strengthen their views point of claimin...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...that bill board is the main course of it . However, they are advertised purpose co...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
...ver, they are advertised purpose course accidents situation for everyone that people suff...
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...ryone that people suffer from difficulty . A good illustrate of this with a exampl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...iculty . A good illustrate of this with a example, A survey conducted by Indian g...
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...Indian government about visual pollution . Regarding this it has survey main purpo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...gives safety. On other side, there are group of people believe that, visual pollutio...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... no suitable for everyone. Subsequently, visual pollution are more cause ; on dr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...veryone. Subsequently, visual pollution are more cause ; on driving, walking on ...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...eover, it has incident cause of building . However, person have through building l...
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...nse this type of incident also developed . Whereas, A survey conducted by Californ...
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...r, they have gives the suitable solution for controller of visual pollution. ...
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...n for controller of visual pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39449541284 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05854204777 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9290622128 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133713778414 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437747766902 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580640469455 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722441198896 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491258204302 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
'If i cant be beautiful l want to be invisibl...
^
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
'If i cant be beautiful l want to be invisible &ap...
^^^^
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... has transferred his life tremendously. he has progressed from walking a barefoote...
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Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sserts that visual pollution can cause ; accidents or not.through this essay. I s...
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Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rtion and shape up my opinion by the end .I completely agree to this statement. It...
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Line 1, column 512, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ion and shape up my opinion by the end .I completely agree to this statement. It ...
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Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...t representation. In conclusion, as we seen there are number of answer to this ques...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e are number of answer to this question an balance , however, I trend to believe t...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er of answer to this question an balance , however, I trend to believe that '...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...due to implementation of some laws' . To begin with, visual pollution course...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...any types of harmful effects to everyone . Moreover, this is so dangerous conditio...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...for every that people by their surviving . they strengthen their views point of cl...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... every that people by their surviving . they strengthen their views point of claimin...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that bill board is the main course of it . However, they are advertised purpose co...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accidents'' or 'accident's'?
Suggestion: accidents'; accident's
...ver, they are advertised purpose course accidents situation for everyone that people suff...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ryone that people suffer from difficulty . A good illustrate of this with a exampl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...iculty . A good illustrate of this with a example, A survey conducted by Indian g...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...Indian government about visual pollution . Regarding this it has survey main purpo...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...gives safety. On other side, there are group of people believe that, visual pollutio...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... no suitable for everyone. Subsequently, visual pollution are more cause ; on dr...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...veryone. Subsequently, visual pollution are more cause ; on driving, walking on ...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eover, it has incident cause of building . However, person have through building l...
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Line 4, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nse this type of incident also developed . Whereas, A survey conducted by Californ...
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Line 4, column 606, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, they have gives the suitable solution for controller of visual pollution. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n for controller of visual pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39449541284 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05854204777 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9290622128 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133713778414 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437747766902 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580640469455 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722441198896 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491258204302 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.