It is often argued that refugee should be accepted by richer country and provided them assistance of fundamental needs such as food, living etc. From my perspective, I completely disagree with given statement because this expedition will seem to be rising crisis in society in the upcoming days.
First of all, if the richer country give any sorts of assistance to refugee, the economic condition of those country might be affected. In a way, giving assistance might be effective to motivate them but continuous assistance can be leads to unmatured of them because they are always waiting on to be helped which creates an environment of dependent society. As a result, nations should sustain unemployment citizen, lack on fundamental needs such as health issue, education problems and huge transportation issue.
Secondly, accepting more and more refugee can bring the unplanned society that can be harmful for natural property such as forests, mountains etc. If when population of people is rise, the chances of using resources will increase respectively. Then, natural properties will use randomly which will creates the lack of those properties that use in human daily lives. Also, the environment problems will increase rapidly because high amount of refugee need huge amounts of goods where government might fail to give it properly. As a result, nature will be seen as a bank of problems.
In conclusion, accepting refugee by wealthy country is bring a lot of problems on society. It bring the environmental problems by using randomly natural resources and it makes unmatured on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83849746716 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5862421955 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205146498765 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786768566014 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928722396483 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137129367801 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714003348143 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.