What are the advantages and dusadvantages for children of eathching television?
In a hectic lifestyle of people and parents in particular there is remarkably little time to be with their children. However thanks to the great breakthrough of television which has been a source of excitement and keeping children busy. In this essey I am going to cover the pros and cons of watching tv for young generation.
To start with positive sides. There are numerous educational tv-shows designated for children which they could learn new things and explore the world virtually. Especially since the coronavirus outbreak emerged almost all schools and kindergardens have been shut down which left only one way for children for schooling. It was studying from home while online classes would be broadcasted via TV.
Another plus of watching tv for children is that, they are more likely broaden their horizon by tv -series they watch. It is said that, a lot of documentry films about successful and influential people help children learn moral values as many of those kinds of films encourage its young audience to do somthing good.
Turning to disadvantages, it is nearly impossible to observe what our children are watching on tv. They have a freedom to watch what gets their attention and interested. Unfortunately, there are increasing number of movies which involve cruelty and violence. They inavitably could have a negative impact on children's phsychology that could result in unexpected changes on their behaviour. Last but not least, some health issues on children are linked to spending massive amount of time in front of a green screen. Recent study has shawn that a number of children adminestred to hospitals with eye-side complaints is rocketing.
To sum up, although there are some advantages to watching tv for children we should not forget its disadvantages that could lead traumatic consequences in the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in particular, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82704660044 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.828147007 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237146150798 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706890346548 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481343829461 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131193662727 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236426206736 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.