In conclusion, salary can play a radical role in people's decision to pursue a career. It is determined
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nonetheless, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18004338395 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98683752081 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58568329718 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0568810809 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.826086957 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106146507269 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287033317948 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343694866715 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742690176558 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343450868441 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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