when choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that individuals consider the income of a career as the most crucial. While I accept the apparent benefits of this idea, I believe that choosing a job should have additional purposes.
I concur that they must have money to cover their fundamental expenses. As an illustration, all of us need money to pay for necessities like rent, food, health care, and education. If people prioritize their income over their employment, it also enables them to meet their demands and have a reasonable quality of life. By contrast, choosing a job of hobbies, passion, or other non-financial factors instead of income, people might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path they love, but that does not always provide them with sufficient money to live comfortably and raise a family.
On the other hand, apart from the job's wage, I believe that aspects of the work also play an important role. The first one is that personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely vital when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for instance, the employee can get over the moon and work more productively. Secondly, many people's job satisfaction comes from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach. Eventually, some people choose a career since they want to aid others and contribute something positive to society.
In conclusion, while picking a career just for financial gain is advantageous, I still firmly believe that people should acquire more functionality because doing so would enable them to become more successful and well-rounded in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18050541516 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92060216061 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0990660341 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116245794002 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436957402926 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416842939014 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715214862676 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384020923867 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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