While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent days topic of environment is highly debated. In this case, many people argue that rapid global temperature rise is the biggest concern in front of us, whereas, others say loss of green cover has more detrimental repercussions on our planet earth. I believe, tree cutting is more serious issue in front of us because they maintain equilibrium of our planet.

On the one hand, it is believed by others that global warming may create many unforeseen issues. One problem is, submersion of low-level land in to sea. In other words, water melting out of Antarctic glaciers causes sea water level to rise and absorb low usable land in to it. As a result, many species are forced to migrate to new high-altitude places. Another difficulty living beings to have is scorching heat. An oxford report says, if earth’s temperature reaches 55 degree, then most of the living species would die off heat. However, this case is reversible. One such example globe has already experienced when Latin America got forested completely in 16th Century.

On the other hand, in my opinion, deforestation has thrown nature out of its balance. For example, trees consume carbon and release oxygen to survive, while, other living species breathe oxygen and release carbon in the environment. In addition to this, forests regulate seasons on our planet. As per Indian metrological department, deforestation of eastern hills in late 90’s in India has resulted longer summer and shorter rainy seasons in last decade. As a result, this part of India is now facing severe draught crisis. Therefore, this type of devastation is seen at many placed where forests were chopped down.

In conclusion, although, global warming can harm our planet severely, it is reversible if plantation is grown on larger scale. But deforestation has already started showing repercussions and we need to fix that problem

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28235294118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93569489189 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1180175206 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5263157895 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73684210526 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162093450171 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460959730261 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039965864729 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968471137698 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514532973522 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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