It is a debatable issue that the death penalty should be applied to capital punishment as the solution to reduce the number of increased crimes and control social harassment. In my view, I really agree that this regulation would be the best solution to some major crimes.
To begin with, the death penalty would indeed be in contrast with a basic human right. No one can judge and punish other people’s life because a human has a necessary thing to live in independence. Moreover, the way that people create a regulation to give a legal option for the death penalty means that these people also restrict the basic human right that is categorized as a major crime. That is why there is still much consideration to contra with this punishment.
On the other hand, there are various considerations to apply the death penalty as the best solution to assure security among others. Firstly, some major crimes could not only bring other civilians in danger but also affects others to commit crimes. For Instance, In Middle-East, there are a lot of major crimes, acted by the illegal organization to create terrorism activities that treat other human life by destroying public facilities and killing people, this idealism of terrorism could be grown among other civilians in these areas, so that death penalty could be the best solution to protect people from violence, and also deter the terrorists commit to major crime. In addition, the death penalty also had been applied to some illegal transactions of a drug in Asia. If there is no judgment of the death penalty from the official government, the spreading of these illegal transactions would be uncontrolled.
In conclusion, even though the death penalty is not worked with basic human rights, there are a lot of benefits by taking this punishment to restrict major crimes for security and widespread of this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98089171975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67625091465 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477707006369 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0208309226 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182669420671 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078233909963 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759019755572 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132488912104 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422263469108 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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