The world's natural resources such as oil, forest, and freshwater are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to resolve the problems?
In the technological era development, the increasing population in the world and the rising rapidly in industries, people use more natural resources such as oil, water, and forest. But these resources are limited while demand with consumption is very high. This essay will discuss some problems and give a solution to these problems.
The first problem, oil is the source of energy, which is known as non-renewable. Because of the demanding use of oil sources increasing per day so it will be exhausted very soon. Oil use in vehicles, industries, and factories even it also use at home for daily activities. At industries level, we can use more and more oil sources, which operating machinery and production live. To avoid the rapid exhaustion of oil sources, nowadays, people already find some research and alternative sources of energy, which benefit in the future.
Secondly, water is the main element for all. There can be no life without water because it is an essential thing today. Freshwater can use continuously and recycle whenever possible. Remain some issues about is wastewater treatment problems of some companies. They still discharge waste directly to rivers and lakes without treatment. As a consequence of this affected person's healthy, some countries did not have clean water to use.
Finally, many plants and animals are decreasing day by day because of deforestation. Animals and plants, which provide us food, medicine, and other valuable products while they are facing extinction. Moreover, many cities expanding areas to build high-rise buildings, causing many trees were being cut down, the animals lose their habitat, and soil exposed to heavy rain with it also washed away. The tree absorbs carbon dioxide that is very dangerous because it causes global warming. The government should take some strict rules for cutting trees and encourage humans to grow some trees in the area where they live.
In conclusion, I would like to say natural resources like oil, freshwater, and forest are necessary and very important. We should use reasonable and carefully for a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 239, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22123893805 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784011999 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9203126751 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176987080139 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487624590169 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521192389578 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976946720491 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434934540787 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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