World travel has revolutionized in the 20th century to the extent that world has now become a global village. What factors will factors influence travel this century?
Will travel continue to grow or will it become less popular.
Moving around the globe fills the life with the excitement. The act of going one place to another is usually done for the purpose of work, mood change and happiness. When a person comes back after a trip, it gives some kind of relaxation and freshness to the mind. I believe that two factors, which affect travelling, are cost and security. It is the strong possibility that flying will be increased in future.
Moving plays a vital role for wandering around the earth. When a person has enough bucks in his pockets than he can afford the purchase of objects, comfortable hotel and good food, which...
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Sentence: Therefore, it has great chances of continue on growing of travelling.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and continue
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1325 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.633 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.448 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.824 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.476 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5