Every human being living on these planet has its own unique quality and skills. It is an inhabitant in their nature and in his or her work style by birth. God gives them a special ability and talent to do what they are happier and sensitive for, they have their creativity and curiosity for something which relates and connects with their mind. But most of the parents are not aware of their children personal interest and hobbies by their childhood so they force them to choose the field of passion what they want to make them do at a young age.
young people have the right to choose their own field of the profession by their interest. If they choose what they exactly want to do, then they are happier and put good efforts with ease. They take things seriously and involved with their mind without any distractions. They are excited about learning and acquiring the length of knowledge in their chosen field. They can achieve new things and with infinite opportunities, they can not feel bored and depressed from their work. They have balanced with their personal and professional life, they get their work done on time and get a high rate of income growth which directly develops their living. But from this, before choosing any field for career advancement, adults need to take advice and consultancy from their parents, because they have good experience in the terms of age and knowledge so they can suggest you the helping information and details about what to do.
Parents have also equal right to provide guidance and direction to their children. They are worried about the future and career of their children and in addition, they take action and decisions for their children's life. Somehow parents are nowadays getting very curious and attentive about their children habits and hobbies so they are aware of their children field of passion and interest from childhood. And some parents do not understand their children, that's why they force them to choose what they don't want to choose because of lack of proper understanding. Parents need to understand that, they guide their children but do not interface in their interest. They can do it on their own and succeed.
In conclusion, I suggest that parents should teach their children and give them direction, guidance, and information about the fields but let them choose to take a decision about going to the field of profession.
- The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004. 78
- The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. 61
- Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- some people thing that the government should establish free libraries in each town other believe that it is the waste of money since people can access the internet at home to obtain information Discuss both view and give your own opinion 78
- Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this planet' or 'these planets'?
Suggestion: this planet; these planets
Every human being living on these planet has its own unique quality and skills. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...want to make them do at a young age. young people have the right to choose their o...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...the length of knowledge in their chosen field. They can achieve new things and with i...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gth of knowledge in their chosen field. They can achieve new things and with infinit...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...el bored and depressed from their work. They have balanced with their personal and p...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...rents do not understand their children, thats why they force them to choose what they...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...why they force them to choose what they dont want to choose because of lack of prope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 10.4138276553 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87041564792 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40245897189 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471882640587 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0053752736 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323121394763 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137467301274 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831423069018 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241291462427 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244613022436 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.