The world is now shifting towards artificial intelligence, that reduces the manual labor work. However this technology is not 100 percent reliable, as for now. Depending totally on machines or technology for any particular work could result in negative consequences too. No matter how much the technology advances, human assistance would always and should always be there.
The new automation technology, like self drive cars, robotic surgery, robotic packaging and counting unit, etc. all have reduced a lot of human efforts, but still it do requires human supervision. For e.g, in robotic surgery, the doctors have to guide the machine in performing a surgery, they cannot totally rely on machine to complete the surgery, human assistance would always require.
This assay has asked, if working hours should be reduced? but as mentioned above, non of the automated technology can work independently, especially where a life is to be dealt. Apart for that, in factories where the technology is used for packaging or other purpose, human supervision is required. This reduces the number of labors, but it do not affect the working hours. The time required to perform a particular task for a machine, will require attention of a worker from the start till the work is completed.
Also, as the technology advances in automation, there will be a lot of unemployment, as it reduces the labor work, so if we reduce the working hours, then it will negatively affect workers survival financially.
To sum up, as human interference will always be required in this automated world, reduction of working hours will directly lead to financial crashes too. So its better not to reduce working hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, as for, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83215071738 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6559111422 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283494566737 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104866934622 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505385191153 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163018459898 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548238186717 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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