Nowadays, most of the people in their retiring age prefer to relocate to a different country. I believe, moving to a new location can be challenging at this age, however it can be beneficial for those who already have a family residing there.
One of the most common reason for why elder people wishes to shift to another country is that, they already have their children staying there. Nowadays many parents send their kids to other better countries to pursue higher education, most of the time after completion of their academic year, these young adults tend to settle in that country as they have better job opportunities. Under such situation, it becomes easy for parents to move there, as they have someone to lookafter them, also, this means that they can spend more time with their children and grandchildren too.
On the other end there are many people who wants a change, meaning that they want to relocate just for a change in their surrouding and looking for a better quality of life. However, at such an age it seems quiet difficult, as they do not have any friend or family member in a new place. In a new country they have to adjust with everything like the weather, rules and regulations and much more. For example, people living in warm weather like in florida, if they move to somewhere in canada, it becomes extremely difficult for them to survive the cold weather there. So, if someone wants to shift to a new location, then one has to consider lot of factors for their good survival.
In conclusion, moving to another country offers a great advantage for those who already have a family living there, for others who wish to shift for the change needs to consider many factors especially weather, to survive in a new place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70684039088 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44290553576 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514657980456 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1999965708 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.363636364 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265461500439 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105658760091 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748330765219 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172569222227 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433719192552 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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