The issue of whether every person of different status or rank should be treated equally has been a heatedly discussed topic in recent years, and this has turned into a dilemma facing many. Some people insist that all workers in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same numbers of holidays every year. In spite of this, I would assert that the idea of equality in the workplace is not necessarily feasible under certain circumstances.
To begin with, the way in which employees are treated is completely contingent upon their attitude towards work. Undoubtedly, people who make more contributions to the company should have their right to receive more bonuses than others. Nevertheless, if one lazy worker receives the very same rewards, this will inevitably discourage his conscientious colleagues from showing more commitment to work. Thus, if the company treats them in an equal manner, hard-working people will lose their passion for work gradually, and this will definitely have negative impacts on the company.
From another perspective, treating employees in different ways can effectively boost their morale and increase productivity. For example, if a diligent worker is rewarded for his excellent performance or work ethics with more vacation time, this will motivate other workers to devote more time and energy to their work in the hope of getting the same privilege. As a result, with more efforts being made by each employee, the company will not only gain more benefits but also create a positively competitive environment that is eventually conducive to a successful workforce.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that all people in the company should not get equal treatment and the same holidays in a year if we take into consideration the issue of fairness and work environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an equal manner" with adverb for "equal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... work. Thus, if the company treats them in an equal manner, hard-working people will lose their pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81338282543 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5779361096 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.545454545 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272395993885 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115841102897 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129874114787 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181096617932 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887350268486 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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