Notwithstanding reaching numerous progress and developments in the health fields, the alleviation citizens' health in industrial countries has become a concerning issue. This essay will discuss two main factors that threaten the health individual, namely lifestyle and poor diet, and also will put forward some solutions to tackle this matter.
By advance in technology, the human lifestyle has been changing more and more indeed it is considered, that because of the hectic pace of life nowadays, people are more struggling with anxiety and stress. For instance, spending a lot of time in traffic, and plenty of pressure in the work environment leads to getting nervous, and followed by lead to some diseases such as heart attack or stroke. Furthermore, obesity childhood due to improper diet and lack of activity is one of the items that directly impact health, in fact, consuming fast foods with tempting taste and appearance because of high cholesterol and saturated fat cause many diseases at older ages. The result of a study indicates that 80% of obese people are suffering from blood pressure and blood lipids and diabetes, which are the field of other illness.
In order to solve this problem, the government's interference is indispensable. On the one hand, the state is obliged to increase the citizen's awareness about the importance of healthy food habits and daily exercise to have both physical and mental health through social media and banners. Besides, by providing public sports equipment in the public venue, and doing exercise must have become mandatory for employees in the office. In personal terms, everybody should attempt to eat organic food instead of junk foods. For example, spending time with family can mitigate the pressure works, and they also can manage to cook homemade food instead of eating prepared food. Therefore, to have a healthy society, involvement both individuals and governments is essential.
In conclusion, adopting an inappropriate lifestyle and incorrect food habits can have many negative impacts on the health of the community despite many progresses in the medical field. This essay investigated that solutions to these problems are twofold: to manage a better work-life balance and to eat a healthier diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30640668524 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77825795532 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598885793872 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9426201367 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11632347349 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367377853966 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351250809204 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751081527041 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323323096662 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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